Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 18 May 2020
Super Duper Duffy
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Nice layout Scarlett. I like the big pics and organised text. You have given predictions for your books. Next time you could include a little more detail in those predictions. What do you think school would look like with only boys?
ReplyDeleteHi Mr Gray
ReplyDeleteI am glad you like my organised text and the big pictures.
You are right next time I will add a little more detail into my predictions.
I think the school would not look amazing with only boys, there would be heaps of football and football cards ( I have nothing against football. )
There would be lots and lots of noise ( no offense. )
What do you think it would look like if school was girls only?
Well I wouldn't know because I wouldn't be there. They have boy and girl highschools. Do you know what highschool you are going to?
ReplyDeleteI don´t really know but I have a small feeling that it might be the new one but I do not know.
ReplyDeleteWhat high school did you go to?
hi Scarlett my name is Dakota I really like your book I and how you describe them and I hope you have fun reading them
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