Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 22 May 2020
My Monster
My dojo monster is strawberry red and his hair is mud brown. He has got teensy weensy dots on his arms and looks nothing like me. He is pulling a funny face that I would definitely pull. He has wide energetic eyes. That is my monster.
What do you think
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Your monster is very cute Scarlett. I love his hair. I like how you have described him, especially the line "wide energetic eyes". Have you given your monster a name? Don't forget to add a WALT in your posts.
ReplyDeletecool. My monster is funny
ReplyDeleteWOW scarlet i love how you describe you charter! I hope you get lots of dojo points! Maybe next time biger letters!
ReplyDeleteFrom Paige!