Wednesday, 13 May 2020

Perfect Paragraphs

WALT: Write a paragraph each for two characters.
Today I write a paragraph about the girl in the red hood and about the shadow wolves.
Yesterday my class started looking at a version of little red riding hood. ( Good job if you figured that out from yesterday. ) So today we carried on with that.
It was okay on the fun level.
( I drew the pictures. )















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2 comments:

  1. Mrs Judkins14 May 2020 at 09:48

    What great paragraphs Scarlett. I love the line about the wolves "tomato red glaring eyes" it really helps me to picture them. I really like your drawing of the girl in the red hood, well done. Which character did you enjoy writing about the most?

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  2. Sarah14 May 2020 at 11:13

    Hi Scarlett
    Wow you have done some wonderful writing. I like how you have used lots of adjectives to describe the characters. I really like the simile " her hair is as white as snow". Good job Scarlett.
    Sarah

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