Yesterday I did a plan for my writing today I did two paragraphs for my writing.
I did it on The little shoemaker.
It was fun to think about what he looks like.
Here is my writing.
The little shoemaker
The little shoemaker has a big hazelnut brown moustache and his hair is also brown. He has a white apron on and a blue shirt on. His pants are big and over size. He Has large square glasses that take up a lot of his face.
He is very short and small. He owns a shoe shop and his shoes are alive. He moves quickly and quietly.He is nice to all his shoes and puts his own style into it.
Did I do a good job describing him?
Hi Scarlett, I love the drawing of the Little shoemaker. What I could read of the description sounded really good, but unfortunately the writing has gone of the page so I cannot read a lot of it.
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