Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 31 July 2020
10 Thing I Am Thankful For
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi i'm charlie from rawhiti school I'm thankful for my friends and family and food. next time put full stops on the end of the the words.
ReplyDeleteI thought you did really well and I love your background. BYE.
Thank you for your feedback Charlie.
ReplyDeleteNext time I will make sure I add full stops.
Bye