Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 26 March 2020
Mouse creature
I did mine about a weird mouse creature.
It was fun to think what was going on and make up what they were thinking.
If you could write about something
what would it be?
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Hi Scarlett, she does look a bit stressed. I like the way you have highlighted the punctuation, especially the use of ellipses. 'well... squashed.' Think about your layout next time, I was a bit confused by the ending. They are cute babies, what animal do you think has the cutest babies?
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