Thursday, 26 March 2020

Mouse creature

WALT: look at a picture and write as if we were there or what is happening next.
I did mine about a weird mouse creature.
It was fun to think what was going on and make up what they were thinking.
If you could write about something
what would it be?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Scarlett, she does look a bit stressed. I like the way you have highlighted the punctuation, especially the use of ellipses. 'well... squashed.' Think about your layout next time, I was a bit confused by the ending. They are cute babies, what animal do you think has the cutest babies?

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