Friday, 25 October 2019
Magical Memorys
WALT: write a recount. My goal was to not start my sentences with the same word. I kind of did well. Do you know any things that you could work on?
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Scarlett this is Lily-Rose from Room 4 NBC. I like your blog post about your best day ever. It sounds like an amazing day!! I wonder how theme parks are made to! Maybe next time could you not have such a light colour for your title ,I could not read it. Whats your favourite place you have ever been?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sam from NBC I lick your blog post
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Zeb. I liked how you told us what happened there. The thing you need to work on your punctuation but I liked it.
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