N to the A to the Narrative

In class we have been learning about a narrative .I have learnt you need to have a good plot. I personally think I did well in this I think I got a little stuck in time so at the last few lines I had to rush so I could not put full focus into what I was doing. I am going to try to  add more descriptions. Other than that I did well.  Do you know anything I can work on if there is I am very open to you´re idea´s.